My+Roots+Piece+Concise+Language

Have the "A List of Concise Language" handout to refer to as you compose your draft.
 * Directions:** Using my character sketch as a model, write your own "Roots" piece. Begin the piece with the line "My roots:" and provide us with CONCISE, CONCRETE language (eGADS, one-times, etc.) about 3 or 4 specific relatives or ancestors.

Draft Due Date: Sunday, 6 pm. Post holistic comments (sandwich theory) to two peers' drafts by Monday, 3 am. (BTW, once a piece has been commented on twice, don't comment on it any more...look for ones with fewer comments so it all evens out).

Thanks!